I have previously presented my music video pitch to my class and got quite alot of good feedback that could help me make improvements. Most of the class committed on the large amount of footage i have to include within my video and whether or not it will work out. However, i have now decided not to show the full storyline for all of my characters. Also the song i have chosen is long enough to get my point or message across to the audience. The class said that my storyline was unique and very different from other gospel or rnb videos, they said it was intresting. After presenting my pitch i have realised that my presentation may not appeal to everyone as i originally planned. In this case i may include a variety of different ages and ethnicities within the video so more people can relate to it. The majority or the class suggested i include old people within my video. I believe that would be very difficult to do as i cant really relate to the problems old people go through, but somhow i will ask older people than myself and widen my knowledge of this. The song begins slow, which made people question whether my story would fit that particular song. I believe the slow, sad song helps people think about life and their problems. Towards the end of the song the tone increases, and it gets faster, this is the point where we see the lives turning around. The faster the pace, the happier the characters get on screen. I was given very good advice to change the idea to a black and white theme intsead, i may consider this for certain scenes, not for the whole thing.
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